this is a strong draft. you are achieving authentic candids, and the choice to use b&w gives them a more universal, timeless feel. the cafe approach might be fun to re-explore. the one image of the figure looking at the wall (back turned) is an interesting & different kind of moment. it is less about expression/facial reaction and more about body language. it is more mysterious. maybe an approach to push harder in a whole draft? In the end, you will need to solve and edit the work as a cohesive group. keep an eye on your backgrounds. there are some images with distracting elements on the borders of the frame that fight your subjects for attention. be especially careful of bright/light highlights in the backgrounds.
I really like how you captured all the images in this series of various facial expressions. The various portraits reveal different emotions based on the lighting and the angles. I also like how this series is in black and white.
Great job! I think that these images are really successful and you got some good candids of people. The black and white effect really added to the images making them a lot stronger.
I like all of your images, they are very cool, and i like how you focused on different expression and it really brings out a different pint to your image, Good Job:)
I like all the photos. I think that picture 3 is not very candid, it looks like she is posing and smiling for the picture, but it is still a great shot of Kenna. nice job, overall!
this is a strong draft. you are achieving authentic candids, and the choice to use b&w gives them a more universal, timeless feel. the cafe approach might be fun to re-explore. the one image of the figure looking at the wall (back turned) is an interesting & different kind of moment. it is less about expression/facial reaction and more about body language. it is more mysterious. maybe an approach to push harder in a whole draft? In the end, you will need to solve and edit the work as a cohesive group. keep an eye on your backgrounds. there are some images with distracting elements on the borders of the frame that fight your subjects for attention. be especially careful of bright/light highlights in the backgrounds.
ReplyDeleteI really like all these images and I think you captured the people really well! Great job with this assignment!! :)
ReplyDeleteI really like how you captured all the images in this series of various facial expressions. The various portraits reveal different emotions based on the lighting and the angles. I also like how this series is in black and white.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I think that these images are really successful and you got some good candids of people. The black and white effect really added to the images making them a lot stronger.
ReplyDeleteI like all of your images, they are very cool, and i like how you focused on different expression and it really brings out a different pint to your image, Good Job:)
ReplyDeleteI like all the photos. I think that picture 3 is not very candid, it looks like she is posing and smiling for the picture, but it is still a great shot of Kenna. nice job, overall!
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